Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Feedback from Rob

Dear Kaleb,

I loved hearing how your learning is going. Your strength as a writer is the creative ideas you have. You’ve identified that you need to add more detail into your writing to make it better. Keep practising your writing and sharing what you do in different ways. Try sharing it through your portfolio with other people in your whanau.

I’m pleased you are enjoying your reading and school.

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